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Coalescent  by Stephen Baxter


This is the first book in the Destiny's Children series.

One might get the feeling this fell into another genre.  Even up through the first 35% of the book just about all you have is alternating chapters about modern-day England and ancient Britain in the days when the remains of Roman civilization were crumbling there.  At least for me, this dual story-line of current and ancient times makes me think of stories based on reincarnation or magical time travel between the two periods.  Since those aren't the kinds of books I choose to read, there was some foreboding in this.  But perhaps there was a light at the end of the tunnel.  There were a few references in the modern-day chapters about scientists finding "an anomaly" in the Kuiper Belt - it seemed as if there was something there with a regular shape suggesting an artificial construct.  Still, it was rather vague and indefinite - not very secure ground to convince me this would really turn out to be science fiction.

George is a middle-aged professional in modern London.  He works in software testing.  There's not always a lot of work as management is more concerned about getting software out the door than giving it a thorough test.  [This is, of course, just fiction. ☺ ]  His father, in Manchester, dies.  Hidden in his father's house is a photo of a pre-school George with a similarly aged girl who looks like him.  Upon investigating he learns it's a twin sister he doesn't recall and his family has never discussed.  She was sent away to a religious school in Rome run by the Holy Mary Queen Of Virgins order.  His father's bank account shows he's been sending regular payments to the order, even though the sister must be middle-aged as well.

Regina was the child of an elite family in Fifth Century Britain.  The Roman Empire has recently withdrawn from England and order is breaking down.  Regina loses her privileged status in stages and ends up raising a daughter on a farm in an out-of-the-way part of the country.  Then she becomes associated with a not-so-fairy-tale-ish pictured King Arthur.  Then makes her way to Rome where she becomes instrumental in the development of the women's religious order.

We are now introduced to this secretive order "Holy Mary Queen Of Virgins" that has come down the centuries.  Was I reading the Da Vinci Code by accident?  For a while the book changes gears.  Rather than jumping back and forth between chapters about George and chapters about Regina, we have ancient chapters about Regina and the order, and chapters about the present day order and some of its members.

Later, we reach the point where the present-day chapters include both George and members of the order, and the prior-day chapters start jumping through the centuries towards the present.  The two threads start to come together with a story-line about a 15-year-old member of the order who is distressed she is selected to be one of the order's perpetually pregnant breeders, and a story-line with George's friend Peter looking into the secrets of the order and some scientific anomalies.

Well past the 400-page mark, we do get two chapters about events 20,000 years in the future.  There is a conceptual connection between an element in the future and an element in the rest of the book.  However, the relationship between those chapters and the rest of the book are tenuous.  Those chapters certainly set a mood and may connect to later books in the series, but they also leave a lot of unanswered questions.

If you're interested in such things as ancient cult-like groups, alternative social structures, underground habitats, unromantic views of King Arthur, etc., you may find the bulk of the story-concept of interest on its own merit.  Otherwise, it seems to me the main reason for reading this book would be to give background for the later books in the series - and from descriptions I read of the later books, I'm not sure how much necessary background this book will give you.

The book is written with an interesting level of descriptive detail.  The presentation is very well done.  While something like ancient Britain is not something I would choose to read about, it kept my attention and did not tire me.  It's a good book; it's just a question whether it's a good book you want to pick from all of the good books available.

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Science issue

While there isn't much "science fiction" material here, there is at least one area of doubtful science.  We are told that in the present day, there are women in the order who go through pregnancies that bring babies to full term in 13 weeks - without any suggestion of special medical techniques to seriously alter natural physiological rules.  Also, it is indicated that after having sex only once in her entire life, as soon as the woman gives birth to one baby in 13 weeks she becomes pregnant again and again immediately thereafter for further 13 week pregnancies.  Please, if there are any biologists, embryologists or other relevant specialists reading this, correct me if I'm wrong.  I'm under the impression that the length of a human pregnancy is essentially in line with that of other mammals of our size.  The main point I recall reading about the length of human pregnancy length being "unnatural" is that humans may have evolved to give birth while babies were more helpless than newborns in other species - so that the baby's head would not yet be too large when coming out of the mother.  If this is true, then being able to gestate a full term baby in 13 weeks and repeated pregnancies from one mating would be a gigantic change to have occurred in less than 1600 years.  Granted, the order is a relatively small and isolated gene pool, which is exactly where major changes can most quickly arise.  However, the pregnancies we are told about in the early days of the order are of normal length and repeated pregnancies don’t follow without further sex.  These aren’t traits any members started with.  So it did seem to me to be stretching things.